Funny that we both have written haikus/senryus about eggshells, lol. Was this for ViM’s challenge? I love the cherry pie line 🙂

Thank you! I’m glad it maybe gave you a bit of joy today to stop and look around. I know I needed the brief reset 🙂

Just as powerful on the reread. Immediately set the tone and then the feelings of dread crept in until the reveal. Really well done, my friend 🙂 I hope this places!!

Thank you so much, Celia 🙂 And I like ‘sclever’ whether it was a typo or not. Reminds me of ‘shmexy’ lol.

LOL, I mean he needs to be able to show up! And thank you so much, I loved the way this one turned out. I’m glad it’s being well received 🙂

Aww, thank you so much for taking the time to give it another look 🙂

Thank you, River 🙂 You do such a great job of reading aloud. I wish I had that confidence.

Thank you! I don’t think it’s hard to do. Always something on our minds or hearts keeping us occupied. And I love the image too…it was something I didn’t use for another piece but really wanted to write something for it 🙂

Lol, I bet they are!! The bunnies here ate all my tulips. And thank you! I’m trying to use some of the images I’ve gotten but haven’t used as inspiration 🙂

Thank you, Dana!! I’m thrilled you liked it 🙂

I love how this felt like it snowballed a bit as each line hit and then the repetition with the add-ins began, and it felt like a personal unraveling. Very effective and sadly a little too relatable. Wonderful work 🙂

Thank you for your kind feedback 🙂 I’m so happy these characters captured your heart so quickly.

Thank you, Dana!!