I really enjoyed this one, and I’m glad you paired the song, it was a good companion to this piece. Really beautiful flow and rythm, nicely done!

So many beautiful lines in this one Heather, Beautiful things make me cry too. I really loved the ideas and the sense of moments of hope and freedom. The music also paired so well with it! Perfect choice!

I love pairing music and poems together, while I am already in love with the words I want to listen and read a couple more times!
Just got done on my second read with the music playing and it really gave the words so much depth as I read; I feel like I really relate to being sensitive to the good and bad and you captured that amazingly here!

Simply beautiful, but I think I already told you that. P.S. I’m still trying to work my way back to finding some inspiration.

Oh, this is awesome, Celia! More of that wonderful world-building and intriguing imagination at play here. How did you get the narration done? It really worked well! Enjoyed it a lot and love when you just let your mind wander and conjure up these beautiful tales. So often with strong female leads. Impressive!

Wow, what a beautiful and creative story! I loved the narrator’s voice and have been appreciating the font that’s been used for the content on Mus’d 🙂

Jesus Paul…You need to SOC more often! This is bloody brilliant – Loved it! The humour, the references – fantastic writing! And have to agreee…Dan Brown is a bit of a bore 😁

Wow, this is so freaking good. Everything, the detail, I agree with Celia the humor was an outstanding part of the piece. Really awesome work here Paul

This is so hauntingly beautiful and so, so sad. Your descriptions ons of the jelly are stunning as are the subtle details of the brush strokes 🤍

This is twisted, in a really great way. I immediately was attached to Sam. Your first paragraph was so strong, really brought me in. Nicely done!

This is one of those short stories that you think about long after you’ve finished reading. The pace, the character development – it hits on all cylinders.

Wonderful story, you absolutely nailed the vernacular of this world and period. I was picturing the Huntsman movie as I read this. Loved the confidence in the last line, believe in truth or do not. Stellar work!

Oh my…this was so frivilously fun until the sucker punch of the last line – that slapped me right in the face! Very true though, I use it a lot and hate that I do but its that western kinda thing we do to ourselves when we just wanna moan but have been programmed to not. I love your cover art so much also! Beautiful!

This is so heartbreakingly beautiful and I loved the cresendo into the yellow room and the hope that it symbolises.

So glad you chose to put this one on. I’m really glad I got to revisit it.

As the mother of a trans daughter I teared up immediately; watching her pain in finding herself and coping in the world around us is still a heart breaking process. Thank you Oneg for sharing such a sensitive piece of your journey with us. Love, ROCK

Thank you <3

Such a quietyl beautiful piece ROCK, I love the gentleness to it and the desciptions of the mundane are wonderful contrasted with the vision. 🤍

Why are there these strange question mark thingys in so many places in my writing. I didn’t put them there? Ugh. I saw them in Cath Holme’s as well.