Elegantly lascivious with a potent ending. Phenomenal poem, Heather!

I really love the way this flowed, I think it would sound great read. Really wonderful way of working the acrostic.

Deliciously good, Heather. I loved reading it again

Stunning. Sexy but not disgusting. Beautiful in its way and just brilliant use of an acrostic. This was one of my favourites…though that’s always going to be hard to decide from your mammoth collection of eclipse-inspired ones! Also…that guy has an inspired level of upper body strength and a killer core lol. Tal, fin.

Very sclever and sensual – beautifully done!

Wow this was a really excellent, so sad and beautiful. I’m so glad to see you on here! So excited to see more!

Oh my goodness, this was so heartbreakingly beautiful. Such a powerful testamet to friendship, love and justice. You had me sobbing at Rathlon’s ____ and then bawlling at the interruption x Really stunningly written 🤍

SO beautifully written, fairy tale quality with a strong message of love. Some of your best work, right here!

I remember this one broke my heart. Excellent storytelling. 😢

I…yes…this one made me really kinda teary eyed. Such elegance though…such deftness in how you, in not even that many words, brought their age-old friendship to life. So much sadness and beauty in one story. Wanna know something weird. One of my first drafts/ideas for that particular challenge, was for two friends, an ancient eagle and an ancient tree, and one was very kindly and positive towards the humans, whereas the eagle was very untrusting and felt they were nothing but trouble. Kinda like the Professor and Magneto in X-Men. Anyway, always thought it was interesting that we had had those same kinda ideas. Impressive writing, Heather, findamn.