Wow this was a really excellent, so sad and beautiful. I’m so glad to see you on here! So excited to see more!

Oh my goodness, this was so heartbreakingly beautiful. Such a powerful testamet to friendship, love and justice. You had me sobbing at Rathlon’s ____ and then bawlling at the interruption x Really stunningly written 🤍

SO beautifully written, fairy tale quality with a strong message of love. Some of your best work, right here!

I remember this one broke my heart. Excellent storytelling. 😢

I…yes…this one made me really kinda teary eyed. Such elegance though…such deftness in how you, in not even that many words, brought their age-old friendship to life. So much sadness and beauty in one story. Wanna know something weird. One of my first drafts/ideas for that particular challenge, was for two friends, an ancient eagle and an ancient tree, and one was very kindly and positive towards the humans, whereas the eagle was very untrusting and felt they were nothing but trouble. Kinda like the Professor and Magneto in X-Men. Anyway, always thought it was interesting that we had had those same kinda ideas. Impressive writing, Heather, findamn.

Aw Rock you are so beautiful and talented insode and out. One of life’s gift to me has been you x I love the intricate, complicated, wonderful beauty you exude in writing and in our interactions. Stunning piece x

Absolutely beautifully done here, I love that it’s a short piece that shows the reader (us) exactly who you are. Just gorgeous.

Ah to say that this brought tears to my eyes wouldn’t be enough to say the emotions you conveyed in this. I felt myself in the lines and wondered if maybe we all experience writing the same way, a way to escape and be. Thank you for sharing!

Oh my, Hayley. This is…raw and brutal in places to read. Proper bleeding out on the page/screen writing. My own experiences of addiction and it’s hold ring many truths…even if I’m coming from a different angle. Brave and courageous writing…Well done for writing, sharing and working through this all!

Okay… Chapter one… got it- Where’s the rest?? But seriously, this was fantastic River, your dialogue especially. Also didn’t need much detail for me to have impressively detailed images of both Dan and Lynn in my head. Would love to continue reading if you have more to this series!!

River, you’ve got something going with this story. Witches recruiting for powers, a reluctant heir. Good stuff. I was absorbed in this – and I knew it’d be a teaser chapter when I read the first sentence, but come on, haha! Put continuing this story on top in your WIP folder!