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Cries of the innocent ‘Oh Rathlon, what have you done this time?’ Ishu stared down in dismay at his friend, bent over and covered in deep scratches. ‘I […]
- River Joy replied 2 years, 6 months ago
  
  Wow this was a really excellent, so sad and beautiful. I’m so glad to see you on here! So excited to see more!
  - Heather Hubler replied 2 years, 6 months ago
    
    Thank you so much, River 🙂 I was so unsure what to make my first post!
    - River Joy replied 2 years, 6 months ago
      
      I’m glad this was the first one! really great stuff. =]
- Celia replied 2 years, 6 months ago
  
  Oh my goodness, this was so heartbreakingly beautiful. Such a powerful testamet to friendship, love and justice. You had me sobbing at Rathlon’s ____ and then bawlling at the interruption x Really stunningly written 🤍
  - Heather Hubler replied 2 years, 6 months ago
    
    Thank you for your kind feedback 🙂 I’m so happy these characters captured your heart so quickly.
- Dana Stewart replied 2 years, 6 months ago
  
  SO beautifully written, fairy tale quality with a strong message of love. Some of your best work, right here!
  - Heather Hubler replied 2 years, 6 months ago
    
    Thank you, Dana!! I’m thrilled you liked it 🙂
- Cathy Holmes replied 2 years, 6 months ago
  
  I remember this one broke my heart. Excellent storytelling. 😢
  - Heather Hubler replied 2 years, 6 months ago
    
    It broke mine too 🙁 Thank you for putting yourself through it again!
- Paul Stewart replied 2 years, 6 months ago
  
  I…yes…this one made me really kinda teary eyed. Such elegance though…such deftness in how you, in not even that many words, brought their age-old friendship to life. So much sadness and beauty in one story. Wanna know something weird. One of my first drafts/ideas for that particular challenge, was for two friends, an ancient eagle and an ancient tree, and one was very kindly and positive towards the humans, whereas the eagle was very untrusting and felt they were nothing but trouble. Kinda like the Professor and Magneto in X-Men. Anyway, always thought it was interesting that we had had those same kinda ideas. Impressive writing, Heather, findamn.
Celia joined the group European Writers 2 years, 6 months ago
Celia wrote a new post 2 years, 6 months ago

A thousand Tiny Paper Cuts. Her life, as is the case with many women of her age – many women of any age if the truth be told… and men too, looked like any […]
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River Joy wrote a new post 2 years, 6 months ago

cement and honey my heart fills up backwards with cement and horseflies no blood no more and i’m being eaten alive once upon a morning i thought i’d pray to […]
River Joy wrote a new post 2 years, 6 months ago

angel you were an angel to me and a devil to the world twisting my words into nonsense i fell into you anyway silent, hardened enamored with your peace and […]
River Joy wrote a new post 2 years, 6 months ago

Egress � Every night at midnight, the purple clouds came out to dance with the blushing sky. Every night? That doesn’t seem right, but the weather is […]
- Hayley Matto replied 2 years, 6 months ago
  
  Okay… Chapter one… got it- Where’s the rest?? But seriously, this was fantastic River, your dialogue especially. Also didn’t need much detail for me to have impressively detailed images of both Dan and Lynn in my head. Would love to continue reading if you have more to this series!!
  - River Joy replied 2 years, 6 months ago
    
    Thank you so much! I never started the next part, but maybe it’ll be on the list of things I work on this year.
- Dana Stewart replied 2 years, 6 months ago
  
  River, you’ve got something going with this story. Witches recruiting for powers, a reluctant heir. Good stuff. I was absorbed in this – and I knew it’d be a teaser chapter when I read the first sentence, but come on, haha! Put continuing this story on top in your WIP folder!
  - River Joy replied 2 years, 6 months ago
    
    thank you so much! It’s definitely on my list! =] I enjoyed writing the story very much
River Joy wrote a new post 2 years, 6 months ago

seen umble with me through this lifetime and if we happen to get a next fumble with me again there’s only so many times my breath can synch with yours until […]
River Joy wrote a new post 2 years, 6 months ago

the sweater i found your sweater today the one you gave me because you decided i was cold i was not cold just tired tired of being a cliche tired of being a […]
River Joy wrote a new post 2 years, 6 months ago

meditation the other day i was meditating, well i was pretending to meditate i wasn’t quite ready to greet the day i thought maybe if i pretended it […]
River Joy wrote a new post 2 years, 6 months ago

Mirror Man the mirror showed a reflection that was not my own i walk towards it, its eyes hold me strong i am not scared, for i have been here before the […]
- Kenny Penn replied 2 years, 5 months ago
  
  Damn, River, this was really good. I remember this challenge well, but yours is the first poem I saw from it. Well done!
  - River Joy replied 2 years, 5 months ago
    
    thank you so much! I tended to go a little off on those challenges because I don’t like being told what to do =], I almost always skirted the prompt
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River Joy wrote a new post 2 years, 6 months ago

flashback what was once beautiful needed now tugs at the sad ends of nostalgia the parts left behind on purpose a time machine admitting life is too […]
River Joy wrote a new post 2 years, 6 months ago

pen i lost my favorite pen today smooth and perfect for my imperfect writing slicing through the page white on black permanent and beautiful dark yet […]
- Celia replied 2 years, 6 months ago
  
  Godamn. These are song lyrics – soul style x
  - River Joy replied 2 years, 6 months ago
    
    thank you <3
- Paul Stewart replied 2 years, 6 months ago
  
  This is all kinds of beautiful sadness. I love how much you get from what many would see as a simple pen. For any artist, a pen or paintbrush or whatever, is not really that simple…and if you have a favourite one…one that feels “right” in your hand and is with you when you write stuff you are proud of or that’s important…it is so much more than just a thing you write with! Beautiful work, River!
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