this was creative, funny, and really well written. I hope to see more from this world, I really found myself wanting more. Loved the characterization, and loved to see a different take on “the after” part of what we’re doing to the world. Well done

I enjoyed this so much! The quirky premise and the naming is superb! Super funny and looking firward to reading more!

Jesus Paul…You need to SOC more often! This is bloody brilliant – Loved it! The humour, the references – fantastic writing! And have to agreee…Dan Brown is a bit of a bore 😁

Wow, this is so freaking good. Everything, the detail, I agree with Celia the humor was an outstanding part of the piece. Really awesome work here Paul

I enjoyed this so much. Fascinating to learn about the derby. Horseracing is kind of big in the UK but only for the rich generally (So I’ve never been 😁) – seems like a much more inclusive affair stateside. Love mohitos so I think a mint julep will be highly apreciated. Not sure I can get the right borboun here, but’ll give it a go!

This is so hauntingly beautiful and so, so sad. Your descriptions ons of the jelly are stunning as are the subtle details of the brush strokes 🤍

This is twisted, in a really great way. I immediately was attached to Sam. Your first paragraph was so strong, really brought me in. Nicely done!

This is one of those short stories that you think about long after you’ve finished reading. The pace, the character development – it hits on all cylinders.

Oh my…this was so frivilously fun until the sucker punch of the last line – that slapped me right in the face! Very true though, I use it a lot and hate that I do but its that western kinda thing we do to ourselves when we just wanna moan but have been programmed to not. I love your cover art so much also! Beautiful!

This is so heartbreakingly beautiful and I loved the cresendo into the yellow room and the hope that it symbolises.

So glad you chose to put this one on. I’m really glad I got to revisit it.

As the mother of a trans daughter I teared up immediately; watching her pain in finding herself and coping in the world around us is still a heart breaking process. Thank you Oneg for sharing such a sensitive piece of your journey with us. Love, ROCK

Thank you <3

Such a quietyl beautiful piece ROCK, I love the gentleness to it and the desciptions of the mundane are wonderful contrasted with the vision. 🤍

Why are there these strange question mark thingys in so many places in my writing. I didn’t put them there? Ugh. I saw them in Cath Holme’s as well.