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Celia wrote a new post 1 year, 6 months ago

A Progression – Latchkeys to Logarithms Latchkey kids with a lifetime to unlock. Time stretched out into pastures New. Infinite – Springing up. Green under p […]
Celia wrote a new post 1 year, 6 months ago

Between the Lines In Sacred and Loving Memory of Rose Elizabeth Cleveland Born in New York, USA Author and Philanthropist A Loyal Lover of Her Country And A […]
Celia wrote a new post 1 year, 9 months ago

Fly You were crushed like a bug under a hardback edition of Hamlet, Never even read. Splat. Blood and entrails Slipping down the window pane, Like Chernobyl […]
- Michael Awadalla replied 1 year, 9 months ago
  
  love “window pane/Chernobyl rain” as a rhyme
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Celia wrote a new post 1 year, 10 months ago

The In-Between Life consists of the before and the after. There is nothing in-between. In lighter days, I remember the sea with a fondness that can only be […]
Celia wrote a new post 1 year, 11 months ago

A Digital Apparition Dene had long been the epicenter of tech development. Its skyscrapers loomed like postmodern monoliths overseeing the bustling streets, […]
- Cathy Holmes replied 1 year, 11 months ago
  
  This kinda reminds me of the series you did on the other site. Well done! And yay for Adam and Eva. (cool names)
  - Celia replied 1 year, 11 months ago
    
    LOL That shall not be named 😂 Yeah I tried to do Kenny’ gothic challenge and for some reason I end up going towards sci-fi…having never wroye (before the other thing) or read any 😁 Weird!
    - Cathy Holmes replied 1 year, 11 months ago
      
      It was really, really good. And what’s this “gothic challenge” you speak of. nvm. I can’t write Gothic anyway. lol
- Kenny Penn replied 1 year, 11 months ago
  
  Celia! This is soooo good! I’m not sure if you realize what you have here. If you wanted, I think you could treat this little short story as an outline and turn it into a full blown novel. I think it has huge potential.
  - Celia replied 1 year, 11 months ago
    
    Aw Kenny thank youi so much, seriously coming from you…you’ve made my day! 🤍
Hayley Matto wrote a new post 1 year, 11 months ago

Ignoring myself is Easy I’m selling my soul again. And no- No one’s making me do it. Not a magical genie who prophesied the idea or a devil manipulating me […]
- Celia replied 1 year, 11 months ago
  
  Aw Hayley, I felt this. Beautifully written but so much truth and I am sure many can relate. You take care and maybe try to give you a little attention every now and then 🤍
  - Hayley Matto replied 1 year, 11 months ago
    
    Thanks so much Celia! 💗 To be fully honest this was an older piece that I have been itching to revisit and revamp to make more current, had fun with the wave *motion* ha, I appreciate the kind well wishes!!!
- River Joy replied 1 year, 11 months ago
  
  Awesome piece Hayley, the formatting adds so much to the piece. It’s visually gorgeous as well as the writing. Really great stuff.
  - Hayley Matto replied 1 year, 11 months ago
    
    Thank you so so so much River!!! I had this one written in an old notebook years ago with this pattern, but the first draft I did online I wasn’t in love with. But I think I finally got it here! So glad you enjoyed.
Heather Hubler wrote a new post 1 year, 11 months ago

Where the fault lies tomorrow never came for her, no heroic deeds in sight, she raced into that dead-end alley, every ‘worst case’ screaming loudly to put […]
- Celia replied 1 year, 11 months ago
  
  Bloody hell, this packs a punch in all he best ways. Sums it up pretty much I think!
  - Heather Hubler replied 1 year, 11 months ago
    
    Thank you so much 🙂
- River Joy replied 1 year, 11 months ago
  
  Wow, wow. I agree with Celia, this is quite the punch. Really exquisite work here Heather.
Paul Stewart wrote a new post 1 year, 11 months ago

For Ruth Sing-sing me a melody in your bad Scottish-Essex accent lift my spirits from the gutter to the sky’s grand entrance Tell me you love me even if […]
- Celia replied 1 year, 11 months ago
  
  Aw Paul this is super sweet and love that Ruth gave it the seal of approval first 🤍 And title works!
- ROCK replied 1 year, 11 months ago
  
  Sweetly sentimental; beautiful work!
Paul Stewart wrote a new post 1 year, 11 months ago

feels like acceptance Hey there, You… You know who wanted to connect personally, direct one to another, brothers and sisters in arms, suffering through […]
- Celia replied 1 year, 11 months ago
  
  Beautiful message and I loved the allusions too social media – it really is all just so toxic and false. Feeling the misery is sometimes, I think the only way to move forward.
- ROCK replied 1 year, 11 months ago
  
  I appreciate the edginess of truth and life; relatable angst!
- River Joy replied 1 year, 11 months ago
  
  thank you for speaking your truth here, agreed with Celia and Rock, sometimes the only way out is through (which is an aphorism that I dislike, but in a lot of cases it’s true)
Paul Stewart wrote a new post 1 year, 11 months ago

Paint me! Paint me! Yes! please Paint me into time indefinite itself! with umber for my searching, eager eyes of love and pain titanium white, yellow ochre […]
- Celia replied 1 year, 11 months ago
  
  Wow Paul – this is phenomenal, I love the pairing and the metaphor is perfectly executed! Briliant!
Celia wrote a new post 1 year, 11 months ago

The Other Half The motorway had seemed cruel then, slicing through the fields like a wound. An open gash splitting muted green into a severed half. An apt […]
- Kenny Penn replied 1 year, 11 months ago
  
  Wow Celia this is an absolutely beautiful story. I loved the images you invoked. I’d love to see some more like this!
Keila J Aartila and Dana Crandell are now friends 1 year, 11 months ago
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Heather Hubler wrote a new post 1 year, 11 months ago

Ecstasy and agony I don’t often pair music with my pieces, but I felt this was worth sharing (even though I really don’t like the cover pic of the video, […]
- River Joy replied 1 year, 11 months ago
  
  I really enjoyed this one, and I’m glad you paired the song, it was a good companion to this piece. Really beautiful flow and rythm, nicely done!
  - Heather Hubler replied 1 year, 11 months ago
    
    I’m so happy that you liked it 🙂 Thank you, River!
- Celia replied 1 year, 11 months ago
  
  So many beautiful lines in this one Heather, Beautiful things make me cry too. I really loved the ideas and the sense of moments of hope and freedom. The music also paired so well with it! Perfect choice!
  - Heather Hubler replied 1 year, 11 months ago
    
    Thank you so much, Celia!! I appreciate all of your kind feedback 🙂
- JazzyG replied 1 year, 11 months ago
  
  I love pairing music and poems together, while I am already in love with the words I want to listen and read a couple more times!
  Just got done on my second read with the music playing and it really gave the words so much depth as I read; I feel like I really relate to being sensitive to the good and bad and you captured that amazingly here!
- Cathy Holmes replied 1 year, 11 months ago
  
  Simply beautiful, but I think I already told you that. P.S. I’m still trying to work my way back to finding some inspiration.
Keila J Aartila and Celia are now friends 1 year, 12 months ago
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